Sólo decir que este es un espacio donde un niño-hombre-pez hueco-esquizo-simple deja sus ilusiones-intenciones-compromisos-desvaríos, en forma de versos-lágrimas-insectos, un espacio para ausentes muertos que no llegan a besar el suelo o ni llegan a perderse o a encontrarse, ni existir...

5.06.2009

Sobra tanto espacio



Hoy sobran
los huecos mudos del cuadro
que nunca tuvo paisaje,
la manta que cubría tus piernas
cada vez que cruzabas mis ojos.

Sobra la noche (nuestra pasión),
la tarde (de eterna reflexión),
la mañana (blanca en amor)…

Me sobran los besos
que nunca nos dimos,
los gestos
de infelicidad adormecida,
me sobran las ganas
de atarte a mi limbo
y hacerte un circulo de fuego
donde incendiar
mis miedos enfermizos.

Sobran heridas
e ideas suicidas.
Sobran recuerdos
e imágenes sin misa,
el escote de tu boca
los labios de tu pecho.

Sobran voluntades
para hacer del silencio
un diamante en bruto,
para hacer del espejo
un reflejo sin tiempo.

Hay tantos espacios
por llenar en el cuerpo,
tantos suspiros
por reflactar en el alma.

Temo estar muriendo
en la cúspide de mi inspiración,
entre tanto y tanto
observo una nada asfixiante.

Me sobra tanto espacio si no estás,
me sobra la vida
si no puedo olvidar…

23 estrías de entendimiento:

DeaR dijo...

Yo sé de espacios vacíos. cuando algo sobra es que algo falta, o es que nos estamos haciendo más pequeños, diminutos.

Me gusto mucho el mensaje que has colgado en tu blog, Fede, eres muy sincero y eso se agradece mucho.

SLDS.

Pablo Mariosa dijo...

Todos los días y en muchos blogs se escriben confesiones de amor, por lo que es un motivo recurrente, aunque nos llegue bajo un disfraz diferente en cada ocasión.

Sin embargo, creo que es destacable cómo está planteado a partir de tus versos, donde la sinceridad del narrador-poeta no cae en las palabras que muchos repiten sino que expresan su sentimiento a través de versos que se hacen sentir a través de metáforas de una cantidad de sobras que demandan recaer sobre la figura en ausencia.

Te invito a visitar mi blog.

Saludos,

Pablo

Zaora dijo...

:(:( es triste mi Kira, y que hacer con todos esos besos que no recibieron? y con todo lo que dejaron y les pertenecia? ...
En realidad si sobra mucho espacio.

Besos...

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